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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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I am Kim Lee. I am now 17 years old. When I was at the age of 15 I started getting acne. My face looked terrible, I always felt depressed and insecure about appearance. Then I came to see one of my best friends, who always gave me good advice. I...

I am Kim Lee. I am now 17 years old. When I was at the age of 15 I started getting acne.

My face looked terrible, I always felt depressed and insecure about appearance. Then I came to see one of my best friends, who always gave me good advice. I asked her for some advice. She told me that I should wash my face several times a day and try different anti­acne products, squeeze pimples often. But this way didn’t help a lot. The result was that 60% of my face was covered with acne.

I found a website advertising an effective way to remove acne, and they advised me to see Dr Kangnam. Dr Kangnam gave me a detailed plan to remove acne on my face. First, he required me to wash my face only twice a day because washing face too often may cause skin irritation. Second, I had to take prescription medicine. Third, I was told to follow a healthy diet, including enough nutrients, eating lots of vegetables, drinking 2 litter of water every day and not consuming too much spicy hot food. Dr Kangnam also said that I shouldn’t stay up late, sleep at least 6 hours a day if I wanted my face to be smooth. After six months of following his instruction, acne clears up amazingly, my skin is smoother and I feel so happy and confident.

  

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