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Monsur Posted 7 years ago
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I am humbly request to edit/show the errors

Dear respected expert,

My local friend recently hired a Nigerian author to write crowdfunding campaign for him. The following is the campaign page noted by the writer. I humbly request to edit or show the errors if possible and we will be highly grateful to you for your kind time to support.

Thank you

Abu


''Creativity is at the core of a great graphic design.

It will be a website with a Highly creative and talented Graphic Designer who conceptualizes design solutions for Print, web and broadcast applications, Skills in a variety of images, logos and marketing packages, designs to strengthen business competence, results-oriented professional accustomed to surpass expectations in deadlines – driven environment worldwide.

Project

This is to provide the best professional design possible at an affordable price worldwide. A market place that help your small business become more productive, more successful, and allow you to compete head-on with larger businesses without breaking the bank.

Aim to provide a spectrum of services and do so with professionalism, enthusiasm, and dedication. A number of services associated with web & graphic design such as corporate branding & logo design, photography, corporate re-branding, print design, website design, etc. will be offered. Whether you are a small business or a large corporation, an excellent service with outstanding results will be provided

One of the primary goals is to make the design process itself enjoyable, create and design works that are successful, timely, professional and on target with defined objectives.

Represent your product in a positive, creative and thought-provoking way. Develop a reputation for excellence and commitment to providing creative projects. Designs with meaning and purpose is what to strive for in each and every project

You deserve a design as unique as your business and this website will believe in giving individual attention to all people worldwide, building a solid & lasting relationship based on trust and satisfaction.


Vision

  • To provide high quality, professional and complete creative services in all design & communication fields.
  • Help Global people grow their business with a design that demands attention.

WHO I AM

Hello, my name is Hashem

I am a talented and well driven graphic designer with 10 years’ experience specialized in Logo, brand identity design, fliers, business card and much more.

I am currently in Bangladesh. However, I would love to extend my services worldwide as every industry in the world benefits from good design. There is a need for Graphics in virtually any field you can imagine.


I endeavor to provide a reliable marketplace for graphic design, logo design, banner design, packaging design, merchandise design, web design, and many other designing works with https://dearbusiness.com/ very soon. I will collaborate with a team of designers to offer improvements and direction on various designing project, Develop layouts, graphics, and drawings in compliance with establishes templates and design standards also adhere to all corporate brand guidelines when preparing graphic materials.

What We Need & What You Get

I need your assistance in funding that covers the following:

  • Design and hosting of a responsive Website/
  • Printing machine
  • Graphic design software/
  • New computer system (if applicable)
  • Scanner/
  • Fax machine/
  • Sketch Book & Microsoft Surface Book/
  • Insurance documentation/
  • Business license/
  • Lease Building/

My goal is to raise USD 15000.

I am therefore asking for your contribution, no matter how small or huge…all will be highly appreciated!

In exchange for your generosity, I've put together some exciting gifts and I will do any design exclusively for your participation in this campaign.

"With Graphic design”, we can push ahead to a better world!

Digital Rewards:

  • · Brochures & Newsletters
  • · Brand identity design
  • · Logos & Business Cards
  • · Posters & Post Cards
  • · Stationery
  • · Banner
  • · Fliers
  • · Magazine

Physical Rewards

  • T-shirt
  • Customize Hoodie

The Impact

The success of this project will make a substantial positive impact on my career opening new doors and possibilities. I believe Graphic design will make a huge positive impact on our society also instill a sense of trust in people.

With your support and our creativity, we can bring more colors and Humor to our dull daily life.

Risks & Challenges

  • I will collaborate with exceptional graphic designers with interpersonal skills; Established trusting relationships with outside vendors and key clients, talented at building and maintaining “win-win” partnerships.
  • If I don’t reach the set goal, the funds won’t be enough to accomplish everything the way I have promised and the way it should be but every fundraised will go toward the success of this project.

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Other Ways You Can Help

Help us spread the word by using the sharing tools built-in to this campaign page.

  • Spread the word on social media!
  • Share this page with others who might be willing to support this project.
  • Encourage your family and friends to consider backing our campaign!''
  

Top answer

Your post would get more attention if you posted shorter parts of it in several different posts. The first paragraph is very poor English. I cannot understand it because many of the phrases make no sense.

  • Your post would get more attention if you posted shorter parts of it in several different posts.
  • The first paragraph is very poor English.
  • I cannot understand it because many of the phrases make no sense.
  • We call this "word spaghetti" because there is no logical sentence structure.
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Your post would get more attention if you posted shorter parts of it in several different posts.

The first paragraph is very poor English. I cannot understand it because many of the phrases make no sense. We call this "word spaghetti" because there is no logical sentence structure.


It (What do you mean by "it"?) will be a website with a

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