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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I am hopeless
Hello,you call address me "the hopeless man"
I am poor at English.My writing is the worst.My tutor let me write some simple and basic English,but I cannot find a thing that i can come up with a lot of ideas.
I am a guy who don't really like speaking and communicating with people.I am always saying very difficult ideas as I have a habit that trying to be profound(this is what Chinese people like to do),but the problem is I cannot handle them.It's too hard for me.
My tutor let me do some essays like my two favorite vacations,which I am familiar with,but there is no topic that I am familiar with.I almost forget everything in vacations.Only one I feel now is that's nice vacations.wth!
I am a Chinese,and the way we express ideas is totally different!
My tutor said:"writing is like driving a car.Now you cannot drive fast,so please be slow as you can.You cannot drive a Ferrari,so get off and try a common car."
I totally understand him,but when I get to write easy words,problems come to me.There is few words to say!!For example,when I write "my two favorite vacations,my words just two sentences:I went to American three years ago.I enjoyed the vacation as it gave me lots of fun."I cannot remember what cities I went exactly and what things happened.I do remember I quarreled with my mom for a small thing,which is not proper to say in an essay.It's terrible.
I have good food to eat and a good house to live ,though.I feel life is meaningless.
Several months ago,I admitted by a university.The only reason I could go into that university is a good luck.Now,there is a hard writing test for everyone there.I will be one of them,so I gotta pass the test.You know what?My tutor said that he is sure I will be kicked out because my weak writing.WTH!
There are a slew of mistakes in my essays include grammatical errors and spelling errors,most importantly,my words sound like very ESL students do.I told my tutor that I am an ESL student.he said it doesn't matter!!!!!
Could anybody help me?I tried my best to supply as much information as I can.
Sincerely.
The hopeless man.
I am poor at English.My writing is the worst.My tutor let me write some simple and basic English,but I cannot find a thing that i can come up with a lot of ideas.
I am a guy who don't really like speaking and communicating with people.I am always saying very difficult ideas as I have a habit that trying to be profound(this is what Chinese people like to do),but the problem is I cannot handle them.It's too hard for me.
My tutor let me do some essays like my two favorite vacations,which I am familiar with,but there is no topic that I am familiar with.I almost forget everything in vacations.Only one I feel now is that's nice vacations.wth!
I am a Chinese,and the way we express ideas is totally different!
My tutor said:"writing is like driving a car.Now you cannot drive fast,so please be slow as you can.You cannot drive a Ferrari,so get off and try a common car."
I totally understand him,but when I get to write easy words,problems come to me.There is few words to say!!For example,when I write "my two favorite vacations,my words just two sentences:I went to American three years ago.I enjoyed the vacation as it gave me lots of fun."I cannot remember what cities I went exactly and what things happened.I do remember I quarreled with my mom for a small thing,which is not proper to say in an essay.It's terrible.
I have good food to eat and a good house to live ,though.I feel life is meaningless.
Several months ago,I admitted by a university.The only reason I could go into that university is a good luck.Now,there is a hard writing test for everyone there.I will be one of them,so I gotta pass the test.You know what?My tutor said that he is sure I will be kicked out because my weak writing.WTH!
There are a slew of mistakes in my essays include grammatical errors and spelling errors,most importantly,my words sound like very ESL students do.I told my tutor that I am an ESL student.he said it doesn't matter!!!!!
Could anybody help me?I tried my best to supply as much information as I can.
Sincerely.
The hopeless man.
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Hello, I understand how you are feeling. I have read that students in your country are under tremendous pressure. Very soon, some of the excellent members here will check your grammar.
- Hello, I understand how you are feeling.
- I have read that students in your country are under tremendous pressure.
- Very soon, some of the excellent members here will check your grammar.
- I only wanted to point out one mistake that you can easily correct.
- " This seems to be one of the biggest mistakes made by learners.
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Hello,
I understand how you are feeling. I have read that students in your country are under tremendous pressure.
Very soon, some of the excellent members here will check your grammar.
I only wanted to point out one mistake that you can easily correct. Please remember that after the third person in the
present tense , we always use the "s." You wrote: "I'm a gu
I understand how you are feeling. I have read that students in your country are under tremendous pressure.
Very soon, some of the excellent members here will check your grammar.
I only wanted to point out one mistake that you can easily correct. Please remember that after the third person in the
present tense , we always use the "s." You wrote: "I'm a gu
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