I am going to retake the ielts exam this summer so please help with my essay task 2

Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.

Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

In recent years, people getting married and having children at the age of thirty are more popular than those at a younger age. I do believe that this brings about significant advantages not only for themselves but also for their communities in many ways.

First, getting married at this age means our society is more civilized. The reason is that for years before reaching thirty, instead of being busy focusing on taking care of their family, people have had plenty of time to enrich their knowledge by experiencing a variety of aspects in life which are helpful for their future life and career. A recent research showed that more mature people getting married build up stronger relationships in their family due to persistent factors such as better education, more abundant finance, ... they have had. These nuclear families form the society so the more families of this kind a community has, the more civilized it is.

Second, most of the children raised in these families become successful, which will help society afterward. At this age their parents may have had a more persistent background than when they are younger, from knowledge, job to budget capability so they could provide their children with good education, high quality healthcare services, entertainment, etc... These help bring up children who will contribute to their society's flourish.

In summary, thirty is the most suitable age for marriage and having children because of the positive effects mature people at this life time have on communities and families. The society with families formed from these people often thrives.