i am going to apply to Msc of business manaegement. please check my statement of purpose

I am applying to Business Management program at your University as I am looking to emphasize my business skills. I come from a family with a business background and I’m planning to join it after I graduate my bachelor of business administration program in the Kharkov National University of Economics. There comes a point in every student’s life when he has to make a choice of his career. I am now at the threshold of choosing my career and I have chosen to train myself in different aspects of Business Management. I am convinced that I can take my family business to the next level with the knowledge and experience. I wish to gain global exposure and understand the various dynamics to make up a successful business unit.
There is a rapid growth in global organizational concepts, crystallized in Japanese business philosophy, to be as effective as possible in the most efficient way. New technology involving networking information and automation influences the behaviour of business and enables significant transformation. This need to maximize efficiency and effectiveness in such a competitive age is increasingly crucial to the success of a business. This is why it is an exciting and fascinating period in both the commercial and economic world to study Business Management.
Today’s business organisations demand multi-skilled individuals with all-round qualifications in business, finance, banking, management, marketing to keep pace with the competition and tackle the economic crisis; and they require top management with premier knowledge in all these key areas – to win the challenge of contemporary organisation, I have decided to prepare myself with further expertise and new branches of knowledge that can enhance and develop my skills further with advanced competency and professionalism and earn me progressions of capabilities and for careers. The MSc in Business Management program offered by the University of Masaryk can improve my business skills and give me the completeness of knowledge help me get to the pinnacle of a successful career.
My belief is that science and technology can innovate, produce a product but one needs business knowledge to market and sell the product. With this degree, I wish to pursue subjects that will give me a deep understanding of the several different aspects that go into creating a successful business. I aim to follow in my father’s footsteps but only after I gain considerable experience and knowledge at a global level. I would like to expand the business by venturing into newer areas. However, for this I need to study the market, strategize, seek funds and get a through grasp on the intricacies of running a successful business. I am confident that a Business Management program from your esteemed University will help me achieve these goals.
Thank You for considering my application.