I am from Myanmar and I want to improve my writing skill So I love to ask you to correct it freely.

My River of LifeMangwe, Gwae Tout San is a village where I was born. There is no school and no teachers in our village and bad economic. Therefore, my parents decided to move Mandalay. However, there was no one who knew us in Mandalay so we went to one of the monastery which is near to the Mahar Muni Pagoda. While we were living there, my father went to the town and looked for the job. After a week, my father got a job which was construction near the Mandalay Hill. Therefore, we moved to near the Mandalay Hill and lived there under the big tamarind tree. My father built the Mandalay Hill Resort Hotel. We were happy there and well at in economic although we lived with a shuttle under the big tree. As the time passed, I was ready to go to school with 5 years old so I went to the government school which was near to us with my sister. (Good organize)In No.9 state school, the school fee was very high for my family. During a year, we had to give money for teachers’ ceremony, for sport, for text books and for equipment such as brooms and spades. Honestly, our family could not pay for these charges for two children in the same school but my parents let us to attend until grade 2. However, the time was coming to stop my education so my sister and I were resigned from the school. Moreover, my father was becoming jobless and we had to move to another which is called Shwe Kyin, until now we are living.We moved there and started our lives again in that block. I was selling the seasonable fruits which my mother left from the market. My mother sold fruit in the market with my older sister. My sister and I were helping to our family so we forgot the school but when we saw our same age that were going to school with uniform, I was sad because I liked to study. One day, one of our neighbor came to our house and asked why we did not went to school. My mother explained them with sad voice to her so the woman who asked my mother guided as to a school which was free of charges for all. When we heard that talk we were happy and curious to know where it is. She explained well about that school and took us to the Phaung Daw Oo Monastic High School. We had chance to study there without difficulties until I was Grade 10. After Grade-10, we had to fight for our live exam which is grade 11. Normally, every student who is Grade- 11 have to attended tuition. Many students and parents’ believe Grade-11 students should take tuition because it is difficult to pass the matriculation exam. The problem is knocking to me because the tuition fee is very expensive for me. Therefore, my father told me to drop out from the school and to work at the outside. I accepted my father advice and I worked at the zoo by selling vegetable. I was sad but I cannot overcome this mountain by crying so I took disadvantage as an advantage. One day, it was raining and very few people came to the zoo so I was writing about myself in English on a piece of paper. Suddenly, my mother came to me and took me to Phaung Daw Oo School to request help from the principle. She explained about our family and asked from the principle to let me to stay in dormitory and to attend tuition in school. Our principle accepted our requested and he was very kind to everyone. Thus, I moved to Phaung Daw Oo dormitory after the water festival. It was my happiest day because I got the chance again to study.However, it was difficult for me to stay at the dormitory because I did not have rice-cooker and a lot of money in my hand to buy the food. Sometimes my parents came to me and sent some food to eat but it was not always. I used most of the time by studying and crying alone. I did not dare to tell my parents about this because I knew very well about my family situation. My mother, she knew very well about me and she usually came to me and gave some snacks and food but unfortunately, my mother had to go back Magwae because her mother was dead. During she went back, my father did not come to me so I did not have something to eat when my friends were eating their food I was study. At last, when the exam is nearly to sit, I got stomach disease. I had to go to hospital every day although I was sitting the matriculation exam. After four months, our result was out and I was excited because I felt badly about my exam. On that day, I could not sleep very well so I went to the school office very early to look result. There were many students who liked me and some of the students were crying and some were laughing and jumping. I saw one of my friends who were my roommate, and she was crying because she fall the exam so I was afraid but I went in front of the board and I was looking my name. At I had known that I passed the exam with high marks. I passed the exam so I am working as an assistance teacher in Phaung Daw Oo. Now I am ready to study in abroad to have quality teaching method. I want to study in abroad to achieve teaching method. We have a university for teacher but it is not suitable for me because it will cost a lot of money so I belief that university from abroad can fulfill my need. I am very motivate to fulfill the children who are willing to learn like me , who are difficult to study because of the family problem and even the children who do not want to study, I will try them to be happy in learning. I can understand on them because I had passed or overcame many difficulties to achieve the education. v