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Letter Writing
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I have to write a letter of complain (for school) according task. Please, check my letter or/and add/change something in it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with a china figure which I ordered from your company. I believe your javascript:void(0) was very inacurate.
Firstly, the advertisement said that delivering tooks 10 days, but it tooks 3 weeks. I tried to call in your company, but nothing picked up the telephone.
Furthermore, javascript:void(0) was cracked and looked unattractive. Your bad quality commodity couldn't be as a gift for my friend. Finally, your advertisement said what china figure comes on a wooden stand with a gold plaque where I engrae my chosen message, but the message was wrong.
As you can imagine I am extremely upset. I demand a partial refund in addition to an apology for the discomfort I suffered. I would appreciate it if you could look into this matter as sonn as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Helen Hunt
(I have to write a letter according to this task: )
You ordered a gift for a friend from a javascript:void(0) company. When it arrived it was late and you were not happy with it. Read the advertisement and the notes you made. Then, javascript:void(0) to the company, explainig why you are not happy with the gift and asking for your money back.
Beautiful China Figures
(The perfect Gift From Memorable Moments)
Are you looking for an ideal gift for a friend or loved one? Why not choose one of our beautiful china figures (cracked) to give to someone special. Each figure comes on a wooden stand with a gol plaque where we will wngrave your choosen message ( wrong message)
Delivered within 10 days (took 3 weeks - too late)
Money back guarantee
Order today!
120-180words
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with a china figure which I ordered from your company. I believe your javascript:void(0) was very inacurate.
Firstly, the advertisement said that delivering tooks 10 days, but it tooks 3 weeks. I tried to call in your company, but nothing picked up the telephone.
Furthermore, javascript:void(0) was cracked and looked unattractive. Your bad quality commodity couldn't be as a gift for my friend. Finally, your advertisement said what china figure comes on a wooden stand with a gold plaque where I engrae my chosen message, but the message was wrong.
As you can imagine I am extremely upset. I demand a partial refund in addition to an apology for the discomfort I suffered. I would appreciate it if you could look into this matter as sonn as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Helen Hunt
(I have to write a letter according to this task: )
You ordered a gift for a friend from a javascript:void(0) company. When it arrived it was late and you were not happy with it. Read the advertisement and the notes you made. Then, javascript:void(0) to the company, explainig why you are not happy with the gift and asking for your money back.
Beautiful China Figures
(The perfect Gift From Memorable Moments)
Are you looking for an ideal gift for a friend or loved one? Why not choose one of our beautiful china figures (cracked) to give to someone special. Each figure comes on a wooden stand with a gol plaque where we will wngrave your choosen message ( wrong message)
Delivered within 10 days (took 3 weeks - too late)
Money back guarantee
Order today!120-180words
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Your Name Address City, State Zip Code Memorable Moments Address City, State Zip Code November 26, 2008 RE: Order # xxxxxxx To Whom It May Concern, I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with the china figurine that I ordered from your company on xx/xx/yyyy. Not only was your advertisement misleading, but the quality of the merchandise was poor and your customer service was non-existent. Allow me to explain.
- Your Name Address City, State Zip Code Memorable Moments Address City, State Zip Code November 26, 2008 RE: Order # xxxxxxx To Whom It May Concern, I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with the china figurine that I ordered from your company on xx/xx/yyyy.
- Not only was your advertisement misleading, but the quality of the merchandise was poor and your customer service was non-existent.
- Allow me to explain.
- Firstly, your ad stated that delivery would take place within 10 days.
- It took 3 weeks for the merchandise to arrive which was unacceptable.
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