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Grammar

I am a bit confuse on my mistake

Last week , I shows my teacher my report, and she told me that I did some grammar mistake on this sentence, anyone help me to cheak it out ? Is that any better phase to presenting the below sentence ?

While investigating the quality of facilities and services provided by HELP College of Arts and Technology, it was important to consider the conformability, sufficiency and efficiency on facilities and services to current students.
  

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Last week, I showed my teacher my report, and she told me that I made some grammar mistakes in this sentence . Could anyone help me check it out? Is there any better way to write the below sentence?

— Mister Micawber

  • Last week, I showed my teacher my report, and she told me that I made some grammar mistakes in this sentence .
  • Could anyone help me check it out?
  • Is there any better way to write the below sentence?
  • While I investigated the quality of facilities and services provided by HELP College of Arts and Technology, it was important to consider the conformability, sufficiency and efficiency of its facilities and services for current students.
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Last week, I showed my teacher my report, and she told me that I made some grammar mistakes in this sentence. Could anyone help me check it out? Is there any better way to write the below sentence?

While I investigated the quality of facilities and services provided by HELP College of Arts and Tech
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