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Jackson6612 Posted 17 years ago
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I always wonder who wears those dresses worn by fashion models.
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I always wonder who wears those dresses worn by fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes those dresses. A fashion designer? If that's how a fashion designer works then anyone can be a fashion designer - take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and make some brainless model to wrap it around making sure most of your body is open to view for the audience. You are a fashion designer then! Who do those fashion models represent? Aren't they epitome of vulgarity and body objectification?
I always wonder who wears those dresses worn by fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes those dresses. A fashion designer? If that's how a fashion designer works then anyone can be a fashion designer - take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and make some brainless model to wrap it around making sure most of your body is open to view for the audience. You are a fashion designer then! Who do those fashion models represent? Aren't they epitome of vulgarity and body objectification?
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Hi, I always wonder who wears those dresses you see on fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes them?
- Hi, I always wonder who wears those dresses you see on fashion models.
- Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking.
- Who makes them?
- Fashion designers?
- If that's how a fashion designer works, then anyone can be a fashion designer.
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Hi,
I always wonder who wears those dresses you see on fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes them? Fashion designers? If that's how a fashion designer works, then anyone can be a fashion designer. Take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and wrap it around some brainless model, making sure most of her body is open to view by th
I always wonder who wears those dresses you see on fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes them? Fashion designers? If that's how a fashion designer works, then anyone can be a fashion designer. Take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and wrap it around some brainless model, making sure most of her body is open to view by th
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Thanks a lot, Clive.
Clivemaking sure most of her body is open to view by the audience.I had used 'for' instead? Why isn't the use of 'for' correct here?
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Hi,
Take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and wrap it around some brainless model, making sure most of her body is open to view by the audience.
I had used 'for' instead? Why isn't the use of 'for' correct here?
Oh dear, prepositions are hard. I wouldn't say 'for' is wrong. Can I just say 'by sounds more natural'?
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Take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and wrap it around some brainless model, making sure most of her body is open to view by the audience.
I had used 'for' instead? Why isn't the use of 'for' correct here?
Oh dear, prepositions are hard. I wouldn't say 'for' is wrong. Can I just say 'by sounds more natural'?
The
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Thank you for the clarification.
I always wonder who wears those dresses you see on fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes them? Fashion designers? If that's how a fashion designer works, then anyone can be a fashion designer. Take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and wrap it around some brainless model, making sure most of her bo
I always wonder who wears those dresses you see on fashion models. Those dresses are not only vulgar but also very strange looking. Who makes them? Fashion designers? If that's how a fashion designer works, then anyone can be a fashion designer. Take a piece of cloth, pour some ink on it and wrap it around some brainless model, making sure most of her bo
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