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Moon7296 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

I agree with this opinion that~~~

I agree with this opinion that students are better advised to read novels than books about real event in respect to two grounds.

I don't know if the sentense with the connection that is natural.(other parts too)
  

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' [works of] fiction than non-fiction in respect to two grounds - does not work- for two reasons I agree for two reasons that it's better for students to read fiction than non-fiction. ]

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  • ' [works of] fiction than non-fiction in respect to two grounds - does not work- for two reasons I agree for two reasons that it's better for students to read fiction than non-fiction.
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'with this opinion' seems unnecessary- the 'that' is optional

'beeter advised' is okay but not very natural - 'it's better for students to read novels than...'

[works of] fiction than non-fiction

in respect to two grounds - does not work- for two reasons

I agree for two reasons that it's better for students to read fiction than non-fiction. [For two reasons...
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