1. In conclusion, the nation with a significant number of people aged over 65 in comparison with the young will suffer the ailing economy and the not-functioning-properly heathcare sector.
Does not-functioning-properly make sense?
2. At such an advanced age (over 65 years old), people have to undergo a problem-ridden phase of life as a result of declining health and illnesses. As a consequence, hospitals will soon be ill-functioning due to the incessant admission of new patients.
Does ill-functioning make sense?
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malfunction is a standard verb meaning fail to function normally or satisfactorily.
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