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The Jungle Book is an interesting story written by Rudyard Kipling. It is a specially adapted version of the first story of The Jungle Book. In this story, the main character is Mowgli – Mowgli the Frog. He is a man. But, he had been nurtured by Father Wolf and Mother Wolf. Mowgli has two best friends that are Baloo – a sleep brown bear who taught the wolf cubs the Law of the Jungle and Bagheera, the Black Panther. They had taught Mowgli everything about the jungle: till every sound in the grass, every breathe of the warm night air, every call of the owls above his head, every scratch of a bat in a tree, and every splash of every little fish jumping. While, the demon beast, Shere Khan, the Big One, had hunted Mowgli since he was kid and Shere Khan always want to kill Mowgli. Mother Wolf told Mowgli once or twice that Shere Khan was not a creature to be trusted, and that some day he must kill Shere Khan. Bagheera also told Mowgli very clearly that Shere Khan would kill him some day, so Mowgli must prepare himself to face Shere Khan. One day, Mowgli successfully dispel from the jungle. Mowgli beat Shere Khan over the head with the branch, and the tiger whimpered and whined in an agony of fear. Then, after all had finished, Mowgli returned to his village, the place where he belongs to. But, he promised he will come back to the jungle again one time.

I think this story is so interesting and hilarious story that no one should miss. I would recommend this story for those who are not only in lower school but also high school students.

Julielai · Accepted Answer

Hi Bluecrystal,

You have some tense inconsistencies. Just my 2c.

The Jungle Book is an interesting story written by Rudyard Kipling. It is a specially adapted version of the first story of The Jungle Book. In this story, the main character is Mowgli – Mowgli the Frog. He is a man. But, he had been nurtured by Father Wolf and Mother Wolf. Mowgli has two best friends that are Baloo – a sleep (need an adj.) brown bear who taught the wolf cubs the Law of the Jungle and Bagheera, the Black Panther. They had taught Mowgli everything about the jungle: from every sound in the grass, every breathe (sp.) of the warm night air, every call of the owls above his head, every scratch of a bat in a tree, and every splash of every little fish jumping. While, the demon beast, Shere Khan, the Big One, had hunted Mowgli since he was a kid and Shere Khan always want (singular third person) to kill Mowgli. Mother Wolf told (past tense?) Mowgli once or twice that Shere Khan was not a creature to be trusted, and that some day he must kill Shere Khan. Bagheera also told Mowgli very clearly that Shere Khan would kill him some day, so Mowgli must prepare himself to face Shere Khan. One day, Mowgli successfully dispel (what do you mean?) from the jungle. Mowgli beat Shere Khan over the head with the branch, and the tiger whimpered and whined in an agony of fear. Then, after all had finished, Mowgli returned to his village, the place where he belongs to (delete). But, he promised he will come back to the jungle again one time.

I think this story is so interesting and hilarious story (story is hilarious story?) that no one should miss. I would recommend this story for those who are not only in lower school but also in high school students (delete).

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