It's already late at night. Perhaps, I didn't had a heavy dinner just now which is why I'm starting to feel hungry. My girlfriend is happily chatting away on her laptop. It's quite cold out there and I'm a bit torned between filling my stomach and unwillingness to endure the cold alone. After thinking considerably, I've decided to drag her along to the convinience store 10 minutes away. I climb down the ladder on the bunkerbed and politely ask her to accompany me. She doesn't even look at me when I ask. Instead, she continues typing away on the laptop and smiles as she does that.
Are there any mistakes? Thanks.
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"I didn't had a heavy dinner" I think it should be "I didn't have" "After thinking considerably, I've decided to drag her along to the..." I'd say "..., I decided to drag" (we don't use the present perfect when we know when something happened "after thinking considerably")