Humanities paper on the Submission by Amy Walden
I need someone to tell me if my thesis statement is ok, or if I need to change a few things. Thank you
Thesis statement "How are Mo and Asma different, and how are they the same? Mo and Asma have similarities in their religion, but differ in the fact that Mo is not a practicing Muslim, while Asma is. Mo is an architect that created something that represented hope, and Asma is a woman who felt the hope after learning that Mo had won the competition."
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Lokidotter1972 "How are Mo and Asma different, and how are they the same? That is not a proper thesis statement. A thesis statement is usually an opinion or idea that requires some proof.
- Lokidotter1972 "How are Mo and Asma different, and how are they the same?
- That is not a proper thesis statement.
- A thesis statement is usually an opinion or idea that requires some proof.
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Lokidotter1972 "How are Mo and Asma different, and how are they the same?
That is not a proper thesis statement. A thesis statement is usually an opinion or idea that requires some proof.
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