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Sweety Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Humanitarian aid
hi every body ...i like to post my essay ...and i want you to correct them and give me some advice how to make it in better way ..because i think that i dont have enough details about this subject..
the prompt is ...
in the event of a humanitarian crisis, many mations provide aid, especially those that are wealthier. this aid may be short-term, which will help solve immediate problems, or it may be long-term.
Explain what is meant by long-term aid and any possible problems that might arise for the country that receives it.
now this is my essay about the prompt ...i wish that you correct my mistake and if you have any new ideas please give to me ..i will be thankfull ...
Humanitarian crisis is that whole populations of specific country or area suffer from disaster. These populations may suffer from natural or man made disaster. However, many nations provide aid, especially those that are wealthier. This aid be short-term, which will solve immediate problems or it may be long-term. But, there are some obstacles that faces people or organization that send the long term help. These obstacles might be in government of received country or it might be in epidemics that these countries face.
Long-term aid is a help that a country provide after looking to the causes of the disaster. This help might lead the country to develop and make the country be in a good condition after the disaster. For example, if a country suffered from the earthquake it would be destroyed from every thing it had such as buildings and property. Therefore, other countries can provide them with long term aid. They might rectify their buildings, schools; build hospitals, houses and factories which lead their country to be developed. However, this kind of help cannot be provided for countries that suffer from war of conflicts because these countries still in control. So this help cannot be perfect among these countries. Instead this aid will be good and useful for countries that suffer from natural disaster.
However, there are many problems that affect long term aid. The first problem might be in government of received countries. Many countries steal the money that was given for them to help the people. They take money for their beneficial and forget about their people. Moreover, if they gave the help for the people, they probably will not give them all, they might make some differences in the shape of buildings or remodeled to like new. But they never will build new things. And this affect badly to the population.
The second problem is diseases. The group of helping people in long term cannot be able to enter the country if there is an epidemic disaster. So, the relief can not get enough care from this disaster since the epidemic will stop the long term help. This might be a big problem because long term group think that they might infect if they enter the country. Moreover, the epidemic can kill people if it spread among the country. In this situation, this people can not provide them with any thing because they might be died any time.
Long term help is a help that be provided to the disaster countries. However, there are many problems which might be a hurdle for this help to enter a country. In my opinion, people who suffer from disaster are really in a great need, so, the government should think this point and gibe them with their needs completely.
the prompt is ...
in the event of a humanitarian crisis, many mations provide aid, especially those that are wealthier. this aid may be short-term, which will help solve immediate problems, or it may be long-term.
Explain what is meant by long-term aid and any possible problems that might arise for the country that receives it.
now this is my essay about the prompt ...i wish that you correct my mistake and if you have any new ideas please give to me ..i will be thankfull ...
Humanitarian crisis is that whole populations of specific country or area suffer from disaster. These populations may suffer from natural or man made disaster. However, many nations provide aid, especially those that are wealthier. This aid be short-term, which will solve immediate problems or it may be long-term. But, there are some obstacles that faces people or organization that send the long term help. These obstacles might be in government of received country or it might be in epidemics that these countries face.
Long-term aid is a help that a country provide after looking to the causes of the disaster. This help might lead the country to develop and make the country be in a good condition after the disaster. For example, if a country suffered from the earthquake it would be destroyed from every thing it had such as buildings and property. Therefore, other countries can provide them with long term aid. They might rectify their buildings, schools; build hospitals, houses and factories which lead their country to be developed. However, this kind of help cannot be provided for countries that suffer from war of conflicts because these countries still in control. So this help cannot be perfect among these countries. Instead this aid will be good and useful for countries that suffer from natural disaster.
However, there are many problems that affect long term aid. The first problem might be in government of received countries. Many countries steal the money that was given for them to help the people. They take money for their beneficial and forget about their people. Moreover, if they gave the help for the people, they probably will not give them all, they might make some differences in the shape of buildings or remodeled to like new. But they never will build new things. And this affect badly to the population.
The second problem is diseases. The group of helping people in long term cannot be able to enter the country if there is an epidemic disaster. So, the relief can not get enough care from this disaster since the epidemic will stop the long term help. This might be a big problem because long term group think that they might infect if they enter the country. Moreover, the epidemic can kill people if it spread among the country. In this situation, this people can not provide them with any thing because they might be died any time.
Long term help is a help that be provided to the disaster countries. However, there are many problems which might be a hurdle for this help to enter a country. In my opinion, people who suffer from disaster are really in a great need, so, the government should think this point and gibe them with their needs completely.
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You have problems with your grammar. I suggest you review your grammar and be careful with your singulars and plurals. (That's one thing you can fix easily) I put an asterisk by your glaring errors Humanitarian crisis *is *that whole *populations of specific *country or *area suffer from disasters.
- You have problems with your grammar.
- I suggest you review your grammar and be careful with your singulars and plurals.
- (That's one thing you can fix easily) I put an asterisk by your glaring errors Humanitarian crisis *is *that whole *populations of specific *country or *area suffer from disasters.
- These populations may suffer from natural or *manmade disaster.
- However, many nations provide aid, especially those that are wealthier.
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You have problems with your grammar. I suggest you review your grammar and be careful with your singulars and plurals. (That's one thing you can fix easily)
I put an asterisk by your glaring errors
Humanitarian crisis *is *that whole *populations of specific *country or *area suffer from disasters. These populations may suffer from natural or *manmade disaster. However, many
I put an asterisk by your glaring errors
Humanitarian crisis *is *that whole *populations of specific *country or *area suffer from disasters. These populations may suffer from natural or *manmade disaster. However, many
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