Human cadaver model

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I thought we dealt with the word 'cadaver' already. I don't think it is appropriate. Anyway, it is unnecessary in the text.

In conclusion, the MWG technique is significantly more precise in positioning of the chest tube at an intended location in the pleural cavity compared to CS tube thoracostomy.

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Perhaps instead of writing about precise or intended location we can write about 'success rate'. What do you think about that Mr Micawber? Why repeating all the time that it's about positioning the chest tube at an intended location? But the conclusion sounds lame now whithout all those complicated words:)

In conclusion, higher success rate was achieved by using the TWG than the CS t

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the conclusion sounds lame now whithout all those complicated words-- Oh dear! If you think that way you will never become a good translator!

In conclusion, a higher success rate was achieved with the TWG than with the CS thoracostomy technique.
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Of course not, I was joking. Thank you very much Mister Micawber.

While we are still talking about 'success rate' can you please check this sentence?

The success rate with the TWG technique was 79 % while with the CS technique 30%

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I was joking.
You should warn me if you're going to do that!

The success rate with the TWG technique was 79%, while with the CS technique it was 30%.
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Mister Micawber.

I was joking.
You should warn me if you're going to do that!
OK. I'll keep that in mind.

Thank you Mister Micawber.