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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Huddled in the corner

Can I say,

After the rain had stopped, he was looking for his dog. It huddled in a corner of an empty house. The dog was frightened and its body was wet. Mr Lee called out its name and it followed him home happily.
  

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I've always taken "huddled" to describe a group of individuals, as in the huddle preceding each play in American football. However, I note my Am. Htg.

  • I've always taken "huddled" to describe a group of individuals, as in the huddle preceding each play in American football.
  • However, I note my Am.
  • Htg.
  • also lists the meaning of a single individual.
  • So you're okay.
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I've always taken "huddled" to describe a group of individuals, as in the huddle preceding each play in American football. However, I note my Am. Htg. also lists the meaning of a single individual. So you're okay.

Re the narrative, it would be natural to say, "He was looking etc. - He found etc."
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Edit.

Also, it's a little unusual to me to use the continuous tense after the perfect.
I'd probably say, "After the rain had stopped, he began looking etc." Actually, when you use a word like "after," you don't really need the perfect tense, because the time sequence is made clear by the words themselves. However, it's not wrong, I don't believe.
That is,
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How about the other sentences?

It huddled in a corner of an empty house. The dog was frightened and its body was wet. Mr Lee called out its name and it followed him home happily.

Are there correct?
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Vincent Teo Are there they correct?

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