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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hows my paragraph? Its about the free help available on my college campus

Throughout KCC, students are encouraged to take advantage of free resources on campus such as academic advising, help with student affairs, workplaces, tutors, and career and employment opportunities, to help further one’s education. The Academic Advising office helps students choose classes intended for their area of study. Advisors will pull up a student’s compass test scores and look at provided high school transcripts to find classes suited for them. Student’s undecided on a major can discuss different areas of study with their advisor, and if students don’t show any interest in no subject the advisors will help set up classes to help them find their major. Equally important, the Hub is a great place students can go to get help registering, dropping, or withdrawing from a course. With the 12 open computers for students in the hub they can fill out financial aid applications, register for classes, email their professors, and check their grades. In addition, students should take advantage of the Library also. First off, the Library offers computers students can access to finish work or print something off, and also has books students can take home with genres from fiction to non-fiction. Also the help desk can help confused students with any questions they have. Lastly, the Library is accessible to students most of the day, being open roughly from about 7 am through 9 pm. Another one of the available resources here at KCC is the Bridge (Located in the Ohm Information Technology Center, Second floor, Room 207). For one thing, the Bridge is a place that students can go to get help with reading, writing, math, science, and even get learning strategies. Bridge staff offer paraprofessional tutors during office hours, and even qualified peer and professional tutors as well. The Bridge is open to all students, no application or limits, and is a great way to make sure you stay on track throughout your college experience. Lastly, the Career and Employment Services gives students opportunities to find jobs while going to KCC, and give KCC alumni opportunities to find jobs after they graduate. To register all you have to do is create and account on the College Central Network. After you do that you can view job postings from employers in the community and in the surrounding Battle Creek areas. If you find a job that you find interest in you can upload a resume to the employer. Services on College Central Network are available 24 hours a day and seven days a week. All of these free campus resources help students further their education while attending KCC. The Academic Advising office, the Hub, the Library, the Bridge, and the Career and Employment services are amazing tools to make sure you succeed in your college career.
  

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My main impression is of a huge and impenetrable slab of text that I couldn't even begin to be bothered to read (no offence). I strongly advise you to break it into smaller paragraphs.

  • My main impression is of a huge and impenetrable slab of text that I couldn't even begin to be bothered to read (no offence).
  • I strongly advise you to break it into smaller paragraphs.
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My main impression is of a huge and impenetrable slab of text that I couldn't even begin to be bothered to read (no offence). I strongly advise you to break it into smaller paragraphs.

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