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XHealthY Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How's my Paragraph? I want a good grade :P

I entered college
because I want to earn credits in order to go to the university. However, I
enjoy learning new things. My main goal is to do well in classes, and I know
that I will fulfill, I can sense this. I love my writing and reading classes because I find it fascinating. As a result, I will pass for
these classes because I love the subject. Another reason why I entered college
is because I want to meet new people. I need some nice friends; however, that’s
not my top priority for college. I want to have a better future. In addition, I
want my family to be proud of me. I don’t care what it takes, but I will fulfill
my dream.
  

Top answer

I entered college because I want ed to earn credit in order to go to the university. However, I enjoy learning new things. My main goal is to do well in classes, and I know that I will achieve that , I can sense this.

  • I entered college because I want ed to earn credit in order to go to the university.
  • However, I enjoy learning new things.
  • My main goal is to do well in classes, and I know that I will achieve that , I can sense this.
  • I love my writing and reading classes because I find them fascinating.
  • As a result, I will pass these classes (easily) because I love the subject s .
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I entered college because I wanted to earn credit in order to go to the university. However, I enjoy learning new things. My main goal is to do well in classes, and I know that I will achieve that , I can sense this. I love my writing and reading classes because I find them fascinating. As a result, I will pass these classes (easily) because I love the subjects. Anothe
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I hope that you did not take his advice!!!!

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