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XHealthY Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How's my introduction?

Raw food vs Cooked food

Many people don't know about raw food and the benefits of it. They just eat any food when they're hungry that lacks of nutrients. In addition, there are a lot of foods that are either cooked or processed. People don't realize how harmful these foods are and how in danger they are for not eating some raw food. People think that cooked foods are real food, but in reality, they're not real food at all. The truth is that cooked food has most of nutrients destroyed due to heat. Also, enzymes are destroyed too. There have been many researches by scientific about eating raw foods, that they prevent diseases and how bad cooked foods are for our body. After I reveal the fact, raw food will the winner.
  

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Hopefully someone could help me improve it. I really want to make it perfect. Also, I have a presentation related to that topic..

  • Hopefully someone could help me improve it.
  • I really want to make it perfect.
  • Also, I have a presentation related to that topic..
  • raw food vs cooked food.
  • I am going to do a comparison instead of just talking about foods.
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Hopefully someone could help me improve it. I really want to make it perfect. Also, I have a presentation related to that topic.. raw food vs cooked food. I am going to do a comparison instead of just talking about foods.
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Hi,

An introduction should introduce the topic, outline your thesis or overall position on the topic, and indicate the main points that you will discuss in the body paragraphs of your essay to support your thesis.

Have you done these things in this introduction?

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