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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
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0Is 01i00however02i00 here ok or should I uses something else?02br
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01i00Instead of driving around in their big cars, a pink moistened cleaning rag should be tucked in their hands. 00However00, what if they have got used to the fact that you are the only one in your marriage who holds those kind of things in your hands?02i0-
  

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02br 02br 00By the way, "those kind of things" => "that kind of thing". And the participle "driving" dangles! e.

  • 02br 02br 00By the way, "those kind of things" => "that kind of thing".
  • And the participle "driving" dangles!
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  • )02br 02br 00MrP0-
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0Hello Antonia02br
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00"However" is fine; but "but" accords better with the style of such writing.02br
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00By the way, "those kind of things" => "that kind of thing". And the participle "driving" dangles! (i.e. it has no apparent subject.)02br
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00MrP0-
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0Hi Mister P,02br
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00What about : 02br
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01i00Instead of their driving around02i00 ... (the subject is 01i00they02i00)0-
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0No, unfortunately...that's only implicit. There has to be a link between the participle and an explicit subject pronoun (or subject noun).02br
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00What are the sentences before and after?02br
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00MrP0-
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0Will this do it?--02br
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01font00Instead of driving around in their big cars, they should tuck a pink moistened cleaning rag in their hands.02font02br
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00(Are you talking about husbands?)0-
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0Hello Davkett02br
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00I think the wives and girlfriends are meant to be doing the tucking, in the original.02br
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00Maybe: "instead of letting them etc., you should tuck a pink moist etc. in their hands..."02br
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00MrP0-
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0Maybe they should just tuck a puppydog in their hands...(when in doubt, just find a picture):0-
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0Hi guys,02br
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00I love the dog!02br
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00Davkett, I think your solution is OK (01i00they02i00 is subject here).02br
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00And yes, wives are the ones who should tuck the rag in their husband's hands. Is it more common to use the expression 01i00wet rag02i00 than 01i00moist

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