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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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How would you write :
It is amazing how much advanced are when parent are athletes than when your parents aren't athletes.

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I'm not sure what you are attempting to say, as the word order in your sentence is confusing. ) athletes are if their parents aren't athletes themselves. You may mean the opposite however: It is amazing how much more advanced (developed) athletes are if their parents are athletes also.

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  • I'm not sure what you are attempting to say, as the word order in your sentence is confusing.
  • ) athletes are if their parents aren't athletes themselves.
  • You may mean the opposite however: It is amazing how much more advanced (developed) athletes are if their parents are athletes also.
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I'm not sure what you are attempting to say, as the word order in your sentence is confusing. I will try, however: It is amazing how much more advanced (developed?) athletes are if their parents aren't athletes themselves. You may mean the opposite however: It is amazing how much more advanced (developed) athletes are if their parents are athletes also.
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I forgot a word
What do you think? Are these correct?
Instead of 'more', would it be natural to use 'further advanced' or is it unnatural?

It is amazing how much more advanced athletes are when their parent are athletes than when their parents aren't athletes. It is amazing how much more advanced athletes are when their parent are athletes as opposed to their parents aren't athlet
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AnonymousI forgot a wordWhat do you think? Are these correct?Instead of 'more', would it be natural to use 'further advanced' or is it unnatural?
It is amazing how much more advanced athletes are when their parent are athletes than when their parents aren't athletes. It is amazing how much more advanced athletes are when their parent are athletes as opposed to th
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