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Monkeydluffy56 Posted 11 years ago
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Hey, I'm writing a short paper for classes, yet I'm wondering how my English stands at the moment. So, there is my question - could you tell if pasted below is gramatically correct?
Unfortunately, the world is not all roses, many people have experienced it on their own skin. When we are going on vacations, we often believe that bad things will not happen, that unforgettable moments and people await for us. However such things do happen, so it is worthy to remember – devil never sleeps. Below we present to you few basis rules. They will help you in not meeting him during your holiday.
When we are travelling abroad, we have to remember that being distinguished from a crowd is not entirely a good thing for tourists. It seems that with appearance alone some people shout: “Hey! I am new here and I do not speak in your language”.
If you want to visit an interesting place, get prepared before doing it, while hundreds of eyes still do not have a chance of spotting you. Standing on a middle of the street with unfolded map is a clear prompt for pickpockets or more specialized thieves. Have worked out plan of the journey before, keep your head high and walk through the streets as though you have been doing it since forever. You shall never signalize to a new environment that you are lost soul waiting for help.
Did you take a lot of cash for a travel? You shall never take all of it with yourself for a stroll. A case is similar with documents, it is more reasonable to leave them at a hotel. You can even think about buying a safe, basically it won’t cost much and can save you a lot trouble, if unpleasant situation occur to you.
Instead of the bills, fill your pockets with coins. While going on a longer route, come by to close shops or stalls with good prices. It is more convenient to pay in pocket’s coins than pull out a wallet stuffed with bills. Moreover, consider using a payment card. Even if you were to lose it, quickly deactivating it in your bank should not be a problem.
If you value your own security, you shan’t fraternize with people meet by accident and avoid drinks proposed by them. There is no need for explaining how it could end, everyone heard similar stories that did not contain happy ending.
Unfortunately, the world is not all roses, many people have experienced it on their own skin. When we are going on vacations, we often believe that bad things will not happen, that unforgettable moments and people await for us. However such things do happen, so it is worthy to remember – devil never sleeps. Below we present to you few basis rules. They will help you in not meeting him during your holiday.
When we are travelling abroad, we have to remember that being distinguished from a crowd is not entirely a good thing for tourists. It seems that with appearance alone some people shout: “Hey! I am new here and I do not speak in your language”.
If you want to visit an interesting place, get prepared before doing it, while hundreds of eyes still do not have a chance of spotting you. Standing on a middle of the street with unfolded map is a clear prompt for pickpockets or more specialized thieves. Have worked out plan of the journey before, keep your head high and walk through the streets as though you have been doing it since forever. You shall never signalize to a new environment that you are lost soul waiting for help.
Did you take a lot of cash for a travel? You shall never take all of it with yourself for a stroll. A case is similar with documents, it is more reasonable to leave them at a hotel. You can even think about buying a safe, basically it won’t cost much and can save you a lot trouble, if unpleasant situation occur to you.
Instead of the bills, fill your pockets with coins. While going on a longer route, come by to close shops or stalls with good prices. It is more convenient to pay in pocket’s coins than pull out a wallet stuffed with bills. Moreover, consider using a payment card. Even if you were to lose it, quickly deactivating it in your bank should not be a problem.
If you value your own security, you shan’t fraternize with people meet by accident and avoid drinks proposed by them. There is no need for explaining how it could end, everyone heard similar stories that did not contain happy ending.
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You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so would make it much easier to read. Once you have, you can post it here again and await another reply.
- You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs.
- Doing so would make it much easier to read.
- Once you have, you can post it here again and await another reply.
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You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so would make it much easier to read. Once you have, you can post it here again and await another reply.
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