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Kbq123 Posted 16 years ago
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In article “Bolshoi Troubles”, author Kevin O’Flynn identified three key problems impeding the progress of Bolshoi Theater’s reconstructio.
  

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In his/the article “Bolshoi Troubles”, author Kevin O’Flynn identified three key problems impeding the progress of the Bolshoi Theater’s reconstruction.

  • In his/the article “Bolshoi Troubles”, author Kevin O’Flynn identified three key problems impeding the progress of the Bolshoi Theater’s reconstruction.
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In his/the article “Bolshoi Troubles”, author Kevin O’Flynn identified three key problems impeding the progress of the Bolshoi Theater’s reconstruction.

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