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Soprano Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

How would you correct this? About weather

I find this structure strange. Is it wrong? How would you correct it?

The student wants to say something about the weather in a place he has visited.

"It was great the fresh air and shinning sun".

Thank you!
  

Top answer

First of all, shinning and shining are not the same. You need something different. What you have is a sentence (It was great) followed by two nouns just "hanging in mid-air", completely unattached to anything else!

— CalifJim

  • First of all, shinning and shining are not the same.
  • You need something different.
  • What you have is a sentence (It was great) followed by two nouns just "hanging in mid-air", completely unattached to anything else!
  • There are several solutions: It was great.
  • The air was fresh, and the sun was shining.
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First of all, shinning and shiningare not the same. Emotion: smile

You need something different. What you have is a sent
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Thank you for your time CJ.

Now I understand this completely. I completely agree with you, two nowns hanging in mid-air!

I thought it was wrong but did not know what the mistake was.

Thank you very much!
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