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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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How would you change the sentence?

Hi!
How would you change the sentence?

Business Communication and Marketing study programme includes everything necessary so that the person after graduation could successfully work in the art business.

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How would you change the sentence? Business Communication and Marketing study programme includes everything necessary so that the person after graduation could successfully work in the art business. T he Business Communication and Marketing program prepares its graduates to work successfully in the art business.

— Clive

  • How would you change the sentence?
  • Business Communication and Marketing study programme includes everything necessary so that the person after graduation could successfully work in the art business.
  • T he Business Communication and Marketing program prepares its graduates to work successfully in the art business.
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How would you change the sentence?

Business Communication and Marketing study programme includes everything necessary so that the person after graduation could successfully work in the art business.

The Business Communication and Marketing program prepares its graduates to work successfully in the art busines
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It's a little strange that the program prepares people for only the art industry.
Did you (the OP, not Clive) mean it that way?
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