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Samsoner2 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
How would I re-write this?
This is a sentence from my resume.
Collaborated with senior technicians to fix complex technical issues.
Collaborated with senior technicians to fix complex technical issues.
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It is not a sentence. It lacks a subject. If you put "I" as the subject, it is a fine sentence.
- It is not a sentence.
- It lacks a subject.
- If you put "I" as the subject, it is a fine sentence.
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It is not a sentence. It lacks a subject.
If you put "I" as the subject, it is a fine sentence.
If you put "I" as the subject, it is a fine sentence.
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This is a bullet point from the experience section of my resume. 
- Collaborated with senior technicians to fix co
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samsoner2How can I re-write this statement?Do you need to re-write it? What do you want to say? Do you want more bullet points, or complete sentences?
- assisted senior technical staff in diagnosing and fixing complex problems
- identified root causes of complex technical issues and, with the aid of the senior technicians, fixed them
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Yeah, I felt that the statement wasn't clear enough.
This is the new revision:
This is the new revision:
- Assisted senior technicians in diagnosing and fixing complex issues.
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