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Exodus74 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
How would a native properly say these sentences
I need to prepare the topic.
Who can be called hero at all
There are extraordinary people in every society and they commit extraordinary acts. We call them heroes.
The hero is a person who commits act of self-sacrifice to achieving an overarching good..
Some people believe that a hero must be associated with military. And his heroic deeds, must be associated eather acts of war, or battles.
However some people believe that to help an old lady across the street - this is a great deed to do.
Some people believe that every person who lives is a hero just because he lives and sometimes doing something good for someone else
Of course, every point of view has the right to exist Is it possible to compare?
I think just need to draw the line between heroism and nobility. For example to save a drowning man in a river - is a noble thing to do.
And covering oneself back other people from the bullets of terrorists, it is heroism.
Heroes are people who save other people from fire or from drowning, etc
To be a hero it implies not only to be accepted accolade but it is to be carry the duty of protection and assistance, the obligation doing good deeds.
Who can be called hero at all
There are extraordinary people in every society and they commit extraordinary acts. We call them heroes.
The hero is a person who commits act of self-sacrifice to achieving an overarching good..
Some people believe that a hero must be associated with military. And his heroic deeds, must be associated eather acts of war, or battles.
However some people believe that to help an old lady across the street - this is a great deed to do.
Some people believe that every person who lives is a hero just because he lives and sometimes doing something good for someone else
Of course, every point of view has the right to exist Is it possible to compare?
I think just need to draw the line between heroism and nobility. For example to save a drowning man in a river - is a noble thing to do.
And covering oneself back other people from the bullets of terrorists, it is heroism.
Heroes are people who save other people from fire or from drowning, etc
To be a hero it implies not only to be accepted accolade but it is to be carry the duty of protection and assistance, the obligation doing good deeds.
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Here is a first pass at a revision. There are extraordinary people in every society and they commit extraordinary acts. We call them heroes.
- Here is a first pass at a revision.
- There are extraordinary people in every society and they commit extraordinary acts.
- We call them heroes.
- A hero is a person who commits act of self-sacrifice to achieve an overarching good.
- Some people believe that a hero must be associated with the military , and his heroic deed s must be associated with acts of wa r or battles.
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Here is a first pass at a revision.
There are extraordinary people in every society and they commit extraordinary acts. We call them heroes.
A hero is a person who commits act of self-sacrifice to achieve an overarching good.
Some people believe that a hero must be associated with the military, and his heroic deeds must be associated with
There are extraordinary people in every society and they commit extraordinary acts. We call them heroes.
A hero is a person who commits act of self-sacrifice to achieve an overarching good.
Some people believe that a hero must be associated with the military, and his heroic deeds must be associated with
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