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Naked chef Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
How well my performance is depend on my writing!
Dear all,
This is for my Evaluation at the end of the year, Tell them how well I've done to meet the target.
I really appreciate if you could correct my English?
"Number of online registrations for the events have become increase which mean that the number of visitors who visit our website increased and I could deliver the updated information online in time."
This is for my Evaluation at the end of the year, Tell them how well I've done to meet the target.
I really appreciate if you could correct my English?
"Number of online registrations for the events have become increase which mean that the number of visitors who visit our website increased and I could deliver the updated information online in time."
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The number of online registrations for the events has increased, which means that the number of visitors who visit our website has also increased. "
- The number of online registrations for the events has increased, which means that the number of visitors who visit our website has also increased.
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The number of online registrations for the events has increased, which means that the number of visitors who visit our website has also increased. As well as, I delivered the updated information online in time."
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Dear guptavandy,
Thanks for your help.
But this is not what I mean.
I want to say " I could update the information online in time. By the result of it, the number of visitors who visit our website get updated information and can do online registration very easily....
Thanks for your help.
But this is not what I mean.
I want to say " I could update the information online in time. By the result of it, the number of visitors who visit our website get updated information and can do online registration very easily....
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