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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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How to write this?

Hi. Please help. How should we write the underlined part? Should we write the way it's written?

Things he did today include going to school, coming home, shopping and watching a movie.

Could we write like this? Perhaps, could we write like this if we feel the pair "going to school" and "coming home" and the pair "shopping" and "watching a movie" have some relevance to whatever we want to highlight from the sentence?

Things he did today include going to school and coming home, shopping and watching a movie.

How about this? Is this correct? Thank you in advance for your help.

Things he did today include going to school and coming home, shopping and watching a movie, helping his wife prepare dinner and eating it.
  

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Anonymous Things he did today include going to school, coming home, shopping and watching a movie. That is fine. Anonymous Things he did today include going to school and coming home, shopping and watching a movie.

  • Anonymous Things he did today include going to school, coming home, shopping and watching a movie.
  • That is fine.
  • Anonymous Things he did today include going to school and coming home, shopping and watching a movie.
  • That's OK, too, if the activities are in the right order.
  • Anonymous Things he did today include going to school and coming home, shopping and watching a movie, helping his wife prepare dinner and eating it.
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AnonymousThings he did today include going to school, coming home, shopping and watching a movie.
That is fine.
AnonymousThings he did today include going to school and coming home, shopping and watching a movie.
That's OK, too, if the activities are in the right order.
AnonymousThings he did today in

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