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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
How to write the following in natural english?
The bus would let you off at a place where you could be knocked down by vehicles speeding from behind.Moreover , although very slowly ,it keeps moving as you get off.Therefore you can't look over your shoulder for vehicles approaching from behind while getting off as you might topple from the momentum.
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Hi I think that's near perfect. I'd put two spaces after a stop and one after a comma; none before - The bus would let you off at a place where you could be knocked down by vehicles speeding from behind. Moreover, although very slowly, it keeps moving as you get off.
- Hi I think that's near perfect.
- I'd put two spaces after a stop and one after a comma; none before - The bus would let you off at a place where you could be knocked down by vehicles speeding from behind.
- Moreover, although very slowly, it keeps moving as you get off.
- Therefore you can't look over your shoulder for vehicles approaching from behind while getting off as you might topple from the momentum.
- Dave
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I think that's near perfect. I'd put two spaces after a stop and one after a comma; none before
- The bus would let you off at a place where you could be knocked down by vehicles speeding from behind. Moreover, although very slowly, it keeps moving as you get off. Therefore you can't look over your shoulder for vehicles approaching from behind while getting off as you might
I think that's near perfect. I'd put two spaces after a stop and one after a comma; none before
- The bus would let you off at a place where you could be knocked down by vehicles speeding from behind. Moreover, although very slowly, it keeps moving as you get off. Therefore you can't look over your shoulder for vehicles approaching from behind while getting off as you might
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