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HappyBoy Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
How to write the better sentence for this care?
I have check the status of my agent for the "A" sale project, but he replied me the customer still evaluating thier offers. I would like suggest my agent arrange for customer visit for me then I can in order to discuss their customer needs in detail, and ask my agent what is his think, whether this visit trip is necessary. or he got any suggestion?
How to write the better email to request this customer visit? Please help me correct above explanation sentence as well.
Thank you very much!!
Happyboy
How to write the better email to request this customer visit? Please help me correct above explanation sentence as well.
Thank you very much!!
Happyboy
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I have checked the status of the "A" sale project with my agent, but he replied to me that the customer is still evaluating their offers. I would like to suggest that my agent arrange for a customer visit for me in order to discuss their needs in detail, and ask my agent whether he thinks this visit is necessary and whether he has any other suggestions . How can I write a better email to request this customer visit?
- I have checked the status of the "A" sale project with my agent, but he replied to me that the customer is still evaluating their offers.
- I would like to suggest that my agent arrange for a customer visit for me in order to discuss their needs in detail, and ask my agent whether he thinks this visit is necessary and whether he has any other suggestions .
- How can I write a better email to request this customer visit?
- Please help me correct the above explanatory sentences as well.
- Please post a draft copy of your email to your agent, and we will check it for you.
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I have checked the status of the "A" sale project with my agent, but he replied to me that the customer is still evaluating their offers. I would like to suggest that my agent arrange for a customer visit for me in order to discuss their needs in detail, and ask my agent whether he thinks this visit is necessary
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I have drafted email to my agent as below, please help me to correct it. Thank you very much.
"Regarding the project below, understand that customer is still in progress to evaluating the offer. Could you please help me arrange a visit to customer site, then we can attend together to discuss further about customer requirement in details, what do you think?"
"Regarding the project below, understand that customer is still in progress to evaluating the offer. Could you please help me arrange a visit to customer site, then we can attend together to discuss further about customer requirement in details, what do you think?"
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Regarding the project below, I understand that the customer is still in the process of evaluating the offer. Could you please help me arrange a visit to the customer, which we could attend together to further discuss the customer's requirements in detail? Please tell me what you think.
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