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HappyBoy Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How to write the better sentence?

Anyone can help me make the better sentence at below?

"Who are we? How realiable are we? These are the good questions that many will ask us. To tell you who we are, we can basically let you know that we have started small business by helping our friends and colleague to monitor, inspect and quality checking the whole process to make sure everything are safe and sound. Since then, we have been helping many big companies whether in manufacturing or trading line to search and buy whatever they want for Singapore market. Thus, we have many years of experience in transporting and buying products from China to Singapore."

Thank you in advance.

Best regards,
Happy boy.
  

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HappyBoy "Who are we? How reliable are we? These are the good questions that many will ask us.

  • HappyBoy "Who are we?
  • How reliable are we?
  • These are the good questions that many will ask us.
  • To tell you who we are, we can basically let you know that W e have started a small business by helping our friends and colleague s to monitor, inspect and quality checking their whole (business?
  • manufacturing?
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HappyBoy"Who are we? How reliable are we? These are the good questions that many will ask us. To tell you who we are, we can basically let you know that We have started a small business by helping our friends and colleagues to monitor, inspect and quality checking their whole (business? manufacturing?

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