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In conclusion, travelling to pristine and fragile natural areas is of great benefits to students, scientists, and the world at large in a variety of ways. As long as there is no disruption to the original state of nature, everyone should be welcomed.
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doanxuanquy In conclusion, travelling to pristine and fragile natural areas is of great bene f it [ That's a set expression] to students, scientists, and the world at large in a variety of ways. As long as there is no disruption to the natural ecosystem, original state of nature, everyone should be welcom e. The part highlighted in yellow is too vague.
- doanxuanquy In conclusion, travelling to pristine and fragile natural areas is of great bene f it [ That's a set expression] to students, scientists, and the world at large in a variety of ways.
- As long as there is no disruption to the natural ecosystem, original state of nature, everyone should be welcom e.
- The part highlighted in yellow is too vague.
- Remember, this is a conclusion (not an introduction), and you're expected to summarize specifics in it.
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doanxuanquyIn conclusion, travelling to pristine and fragile natural areas is of great benefit [ That's a set expression] to students, scientists, and the world at large in a variety of ways. As long as there is no disruption to the natural ecos
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