How to write application letter for PhD ?

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Dear ….
I am writing to apply to York University, for the PhD project “xxxx”regarding…….My name is ….. and I had completed Master of Applied Genetics from Bangalore University, India by coursework. I had completed Bachelors of Biotechnology from India. My objective is to become a scientist at the leading university/research institute. I hope and believe that this PhD program will assist me to start my career as a scientist in the field of Biological science and will also perfectly satisfy my inherent inclination for the beauty of biology and pursuit of something new.

I was brought up in an educated family which nurtured a sense of scientific temper and ability in me to ask, reason and analyze. Biological science is really intriguing to me. After completing my high school, I opted to graduate in the field Biotechnology, Genetics and Biochemistry. During graduation, I had worked on few short term projects. This helped me develop strong interest in Immunology and Genetics.

It will be a great opportunity and honor to work on this PhD position, since this project focuses on interdisciplinary research. I hope and believe that a doctoral degree at your department will bring unique opportunity to start my scientific career. York University has a glorious history of research and renowned research faculty. I had walked through the webpage and realized that the research level is international, the environment is stimulating, and the projects are creative.

To achieve my pursuit of a doctoral degree, I have a strong foundation in Molecular biology and Genetics. I am fluent in written and spoken English. I am confident that joining your PhD program will be a foremost step towards my final destination, since I am in a pursuit of research and not of money. I hope that I will be able to provide new valuable contribution to your research team.

Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Yours sincerely,
Bach