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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Business & Finance
How to write an official letter
Hello, my name is Angie and I am writing a letter to an airline about a refund of my ticket, I want to know all the taxes and other payments that have been deducted from the original sum that I payed and what is the refundable amount, as well i asked them to refund my fiances tickets but they did not seem to mention anything about that . Here`s what I have so far, would be grateful if someone could help me out . Thank you 
Hello,
My name is ............. . and I am writing you to ask about a refund that I have requested through Orbitz, I would like to see the inquiry of the refunded sum and the taxes that have been deducted from the original sum of the flight tickets. The Orbitz Record Locator number is ........
As well I would like to know about the refund for Mr. ........ ticket . I asked Orbitz customer support and they said that the sum would be around $x , but when I got an email from Orbitz the sum was $y . And there was no notion of a refund for Mr. .......... . Waiting to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,
........
Hello,
My name is ............. . and I am writing you to ask about a refund that I have requested through Orbitz, I would like to see the inquiry of the refunded sum and the taxes that have been deducted from the original sum of the flight tickets. The Orbitz Record Locator number is ........
As well I would like to know about the refund for Mr. ........ ticket . I asked Orbitz customer support and they said that the sum would be around $x , but when I got an email from Orbitz the sum was $y . And there was no notion of a refund for Mr. .......... . Waiting to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,
........
Top answer
I would say that your English in this letter is quite good. The only suggestion I have is that the word "inquiry" isn't the best word in this case. You could use a phrase like "a detailed report" or "a breakdown" in its place.
- I would say that your English in this letter is quite good.
- The only suggestion I have is that the word "inquiry" isn't the best word in this case.
- You could use a phrase like "a detailed report" or "a breakdown" in its place.
- Otherwise, very well written!
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I would say that your English in this letter is quite good. The only suggestion I have is that the word "inquiry" isn't the best word in this case. You could use a phrase like "a detailed report" or "a breakdown" in its place.
Otherwise, very well written!
Otherwise, very well written!
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