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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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How to write a formal letter to my boss asking update for my increase (please correct below)

Dear Mr. XXX,

Hope you are doing well.

I know you are very busy, but it has been three months and I have received no changes on my salary, allowance (housing & transportation) and incentive/bonus which we have discussed during your last visit in (city) office on (date).

I would really appreciate for any update.

Thanks and regards,

XXXX
  

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First, I would combine the first casual comments: "I hope you are well and I know you are busy. However, it has been three months since I received a change in my salary, allowance (housing & transportation) and incentive/bonus. You will recall that we discussed this during your last visit to (city) office on (date).

— Wilpeter

  • First, I would combine the first casual comments: "I hope you are well and I know you are busy.
  • However, it has been three months since I received a change in my salary, allowance (housing & transportation) and incentive/bonus.
  • You will recall that we discussed this during your last visit to (city) office on (date).
  • ) "Sincerely," is a common closing where I live.
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First, I would combine the first casual comments:
"I hope you are well and I know you are busy. However, it has been three months since I received a change in my salary, allowance (housing & transportation) and incentive/bonus. You will recall that we discussed this during your last visit to (city) office on (date).
I would really appreciate an update."
("Thanks and regards" ar
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