How to use "thereby enabling"
What I wanted to express in the following sentence is that due to the prevalence of adverts, the advertisement companies could induce people to purchase whatever they need regardless of the usability of the product or service. I would really appreciate it if someone could let me know whether the following sentence implies the similar meaning that I wanted to express. The main reason that I wanted to ask this question is that I'm not sure about "thereby enabling" part.
In other words, advertisements are ubiquitous thereby enabling them to persuade people to buy anything be slick or versatile.
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dileepa In other words, advertisements are ubiquitous thereby enabling them to persuade people to buy anything be slick or versatile. First of all, something has gone wrong at the end of the sentence. "be slick or versatile" does not connect with what came before.
- dileepa In other words, advertisements are ubiquitous thereby enabling them to persuade people to buy anything be slick or versatile.
- First of all, something has gone wrong at the end of the sentence.
- "be slick or versatile" does not connect with what came before.
- Please check that you typed this as you intended.
- I would put a comma after "ubiquitous", but "thereby enabling them" still does not seem to have a strictly proper grammatical connection with "advertisements are ubiquitous".
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dileepaIn other words, advertisements are ubiquitous thereby enabling them to persuade people to buy anything be slick or versatile.
First of all, something has gone wrong at the end of the sentence. "be slick or versatile" does not connect with what came before. Please check that you typed this as you intended.
I would put a comma after "ubiquitous",
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