For a reply to a complaint from a hotel guest, is the following sentence natural and grammatical?
I am committed to keeping the room clean by having your room checked by two members (a housekeeper and his manager from the cleaning crew).
" Remove the brackets around the latter description of who checked the room.
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"...by two members of our staff..."
Remove the brackets around the latter description of who checked the room.