Much of it is OK. "leaving behind" is an improvement over "leaving". "customs" doesn't seem quite the right word here.
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teacherJapanThe usual order is 'leave something behind,' but this time, since the object is too long, I should put 'behind' right after 'leaving."Yes, that is usual.