How to say this properly

Please sign and return this form to indicate your acknowledgment that we have debited your account.

Can you tell me if this is natural?

We can debit your credit card in advance. All we need is your consent in your email, your credit card number, expiration date. Would you like us to charge the daily taxes on the card too?

Thank you

"your credit card number, and its expiration date."

It's natural, perhaps too natural for an email transaction. Your second sentence lists all that you need, but your last sentence asks for something else. That makes three, no four, things that can go wrong. If this is practice in writing English, it's fine. If it's a real transaction, consider a fo

Is it correct say 'in advance' or beforehand? Is 'consent' what we use in this context?
We can debit your credit card in advance/beforehand. All we need is your consent in your email.

Thank you

It's correct to say "in advance." Is it necessary? Don't you think the cardholder understands that you will debit the card as soon as you receive consent. "Consent" or "permission," either one.