Normally the piano sells for $1000 but sometimes it has shocking deals for $200 but it will disappear quickly
<< Is this sentence written correctly? I don't feel good. Any better way to rewrite it?
Sound very odd to me to use "disappear" but I cannot think of another better word, but I'd like to mean that the price of $200 only appears for a very short time and the seller or merchant will rise it up again very quickly
kenny1999 Normally the piano sells for $1000 but sometimes it has shocking deals for $200 but it will disappear quickly Normally, the piano sells for $1,000. Sometimes you can find a shocking deal for $200, but it doesn't last long. "Shocking" is odd, but I left it because it's your choice.
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kenny1999Normally the piano sells for $1000 but sometimes it has shocking deals for $200 but it will disappear quickly
Normally, the piano sells for $1,000. Sometimes you can find a shocking deal for $200, but it doesn't last long.
"Shocking" is odd, but I left it because it's your choice.
Normally the piano sells for $1000 but sometimes you can find it at a deep discount for $200. You have to act quickly because supplies are usually extremely limited.