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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

How to rewrite the paragraph in a correct way?

Could you please check my paragraph below in terms of grammar?

What I call ‘love’ is:
the incite of genes,
something that makes a Pheromone pass at each other,
unbridled two hormone storms banging into one another,
transmission breaking,
loony,
making off one’s head,
or
simply a zestful experience.
  

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What I call ‘love’ is: the incite of genes, something that makes a Pheromone pass at each other , two unbridled two hormone storms banging into one another, transmission breaking, loony, making off one’s head , or simply a zestful experience. The highlighted bits don't work.

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  • What I call ‘love’ is: the incite of genes, something that makes a Pheromone pass at each other , two unbridled two hormone storms banging into one another, transmission breaking, loony, making off one’s head , or simply a zestful experience.
  • The highlighted bits don't work.
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What I call ‘love’ is:
the incite of genes,
something that makes a Pheromone pass at each other,
two unbridled two hormone storms banging into one another,
transmission breaking,
loony,
making off one’s head,
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