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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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How to rephrase this short sentence?
Providing of mentioned information will not constitute illegal disclosure of confidential information.
Seems clumsy to me... is there any way how to rephrase it?
thank you!
Seems clumsy to me... is there any way how to rephrase it?
thank you!
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Hi That's interesting. I think it is OK to use 'information' twice because the second use, I assume, is legal ... - You must tell us if your partner is working, claiming a state benefit or in education.
- Hi That's interesting.
- I think it is OK to use 'information' twice because the second use, I assume, is legal ...
- - You must tell us if your partner is working, claiming a state benefit or in education.
- Providing that information will not constitute illegal disclosure of confidential information.
- Dave
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That's interesting. I think it is OK to use 'information' twice because the second use, I assume, is legal ...
- You must tell us if your partner is working, claiming a state benefit or in education. Providing that information will not constitute illegal disclosure of confidential information.
Dave
That's interesting. I think it is OK to use 'information' twice because the second use, I assume, is legal ...
- You must tell us if your partner is working, claiming a state benefit or in education. Providing that information will not constitute illegal disclosure of confidential information.
Dave
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AnonymousProviding of mentioned information will not constitute illegal disclosure of confidential information.You could begin with "Providing this information" and continue the same, but I don't guarantee that that will change your opinion about whether it sounds clumsy.
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