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Nikoo Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

How to Rephrase

Hi

I feel that some parts of the following piece should be rephrased, but I don't know how to do it.

Would you please help me with this?

"He has already known all the beliefs and theories, but finds none of them to be comprehensive and able to stand alone at the same time. From all of them, he selects, combines and creates his own theory which itself supports the right to doubt all beliefs. Through this idea he finds his way to freedom, purity, honesty and open-mindedness.”

Thanks for your help and time.

Nikoo
  

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Hi Nikoo - Perhaps this is an improvement: He has already studied all the beliefs and theories, but finds none of them to be comprehensive and able to stand on their own alone at the same time . From all of them, he selects, combines and creates his own theory belief system which itself supports the right to doubt all beliefs. ”

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  • Hi Nikoo - Perhaps this is an improvement: He has already studied all the beliefs and theories, but finds none of them to be comprehensive and able to stand on their own alone at the same time .
  • From all of them, he selects, combines and creates his own theory belief system which itself supports the right to doubt all beliefs.
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Hi Nikoo - Perhaps this is an improvement:

He has already studied all the beliefs and theories, but finds none of them to be comprehensive and able to stand on their own alone at the same time. From all of them, he selects, combines and creates his own theory belief system which itself supports the right to doubt all beliefs
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