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if there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance.
On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width. For the subsequent manufacture, we will keep the dimension tolerance within control.
if there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance.
On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width. For the subsequent manufacture, we will keep the dimension tolerance within control.
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If there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance. On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width.
- If there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance.
- On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction.
- That is ok in width.
- For the subsequent manufacture, we will keep the dimension tolerance within control.
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If there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance. On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width
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Welcom to English Forums, Sinbad Sunny,
Your post is not very clear, Does your company make cardboard boxes?
Based on the first sample, the outside dimensions of our boxes need to be adjusted slightly to fit the pallet.
The width is OK, but the length is not. The length of the production boxes needs to be XX mm smaller / larger than the sample.
The dimension tolerance fo
Your post is not very clear, Does your company make cardboard boxes?
Based on the first sample, the outside dimensions of our boxes need to be adjusted slightly to fit the pallet.
The width is OK, but the length is not. The length of the production boxes needs to be XX mm smaller / larger than the sample.
The dimension tolerance fo
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Thanks for your help. Yes, my company is a packing manufacturer.
For the last sentence, can I say as follow:
The dimension tolerance for the manufacturing run needs to be maintained within parametres, +/-1mm.
For the last sentence, can I say as follow:
The dimension tolerance for the manufacturing run needs to be maintained within parametres, +/-1mm.
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SinbadsunnyThe dimension tolerance for the manufacturing run needs to be maintained within parametres, +/-1mm.The dimension tolerance for the manufacturing run needs to be maintained within
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