How to paraphrase experience
In the following sentence, what I needed to do was to paraphrase the experience by "his or her number of working years". Please someone tell me whether it is acceptable or not.
The predominant reason for this is someone’s decision making power highly rely on his or her number of working years.
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dileepa The predominant reason for this is that someone’s decision making power highly rely relies on his or her number of working years. Here we go again! dileepa what I needed to do was to paraphrase the " experience " by "his or her number of working years" I assume you originally had ...
- dileepa The predominant reason for this is that someone’s decision making power highly rely relies on his or her number of working years.
- Here we go again!
- dileepa what I needed to do was to paraphrase the " experience " by "his or her number of working years" I assume you originally had ...
- relies on experience.
- My question is why you needed to paraphrase that.
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dileepaThe predominant reason for this is that someone’s decision making power highlyrelyrelies on his or her number of working years.
Here we go again!
dileepawhat I needed to do was to paraphrasethe
0dileepahis or her
While this is possible, it's wordy. Using their would be enough.
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