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Thinker99 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
How to make this sentence sounds more natural?
Hi guys,
I feel like this sentence is a bit off but unsure how to change it, could someone please suggest what changes I can do?
"Listened, noted down customers’ requirements and asked them questions for clarification with a senior developer when creating websites for their businesses "
Thanks in advance guys.
I feel like this sentence is a bit off but unsure how to change it, could someone please suggest what changes I can do?
"Listened, noted down customers’ requirements and asked them questions for clarification with a senior developer when creating websites for their businesses "
Thanks in advance guys.
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or is it totally fine?
- or is it totally fine?
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I spoke with the customer's representatives about creating websites for their business. I noted their requirements and asked questions of one of their senior developers to clarify my understanding.
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Probably my sentence is a bit confusing as I meant to say our company build website for customers. thanks for the answer.
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It is not a sentence, but a fragment.
It is a bit garbled.
"noted down" is not very professional. It sounds like the customers' requirements were not taken very seriously.
It is a bit garbled.
"noted down" is not very professional. It sounds like the customers' requirements were not taken very seriously.
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