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Yuanzhe Zhang Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

how to make this sentence more fluent??

how to make this sentence more fluent??

My English have been largely improved, not only in enhancing my listening skills but also in strengthening presenting my own ideas in English.

...Many thanks
  

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My English have been largely improved, not only in enhancement of my listening skills but also in strengthening of the presentation of my ideas in English.

— Mister Micawber

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My English have been largely improved, not only in enhancement of my listening skills but also in strengthening of the presentation of my ideas in English.
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Thx, but I hope the whole sentence can be more symmetric,....it is okay if you change the whole structure of the sentence
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My English has improved considerably; not only have my listening skills been enhanced, but also my conversation and presentation skills.
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AlpheccaStarsMy English has improved considerably; not only have my listening skills been enhanced, but also my conversation and presentation skills.
That is great, thx
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Mister MicawberMy English have been largely improved, not only in enhancement of my listening skills but also in strengthening of the presentation of my ideas in English.
Why not "strengthening
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alend.leoWhy not "strengthening of the presentation of my ideas in English"?
For the parallelism with 'enhancement'.
alend.leoDoes removing the (of) change the meaning?
No.
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Mister Micawber
alend.leo
Why not "strengthening of the presentation of my ideas in English"?
For the parallelism with 'enhancement'.
alend.leo
Does removing the (of) change the meaning?
No.
Thank you very much Mr.
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how to make this sentence more fluent??

My English have been largely improved, not only in enhancing my listening skills but also in strengthening presenting my own ideas in English.

This is much more dynamic.
I have greatly improved my English, not only by enhancing my listening skills but also by streng
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Clivehow to make this sentence more fluent??My English have been largely improved, not only in enhancing my listening skills but also in strengthening presenting my own ideas in English.This is much more dynamic.I have greatly improved my English, not only by enhancing my listening skills but also by strengthening my ability to present my own ideas.Clive
Thx,
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