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HappyBoy Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How to make this sentence better?


Anyone can help me revise this sentence?

"We all know that there are thousands of products in ebay.com for you to choose and you are very tempting to buy from them. However, there are many worries have made you stop the thinking. Worries like What if the ordered product is different from as claimed by seller or even worse the products do not reach your hand at all? How to return the defective items back to seller and how is the air/sea freight charges?

HEADACHE? That's why we are here for you. We have staffs in China to help you monitor, inspect and quality checking the whole process to make sure your products reach you safe and sound."


Tahnk you in advance,

Best regards,
Happy boy
  

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com for you to choose from, and you are very tempted to buy them. However, you may have many doubts. Doubts like whether the ordered product is different from that as claimed by the seller or even worse, whether the products will reach you at all.

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  • com for you to choose from, and you are very tempted to buy them.
  • However, you may have many doubts.
  • Doubts like whether the ordered product is different from that as claimed by the seller or even worse, whether the products will reach you at all.
  • In such cases, how do we return the defective items back to seller, and what are the air/sea freight charges?
  • HEADACHE?
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Try:

"We all know that there are thousands of products in ebay.com for you to choose from, and you are very tempted to buy them. However, you may have many doubts. Doubts like whether the ordered product is different from that as claimed by the seller or even worse, whether the products will reach you at all. In such cases, how do we return the defective items back to seller, and what ar
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